Rivet Jump (Splining & Polish)

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    Wayne Dixon (waylow)

    Oh hi clikchun.

    Sorry, this one slipped through the cracks and I missed it.

    Well done.

    I have 3 general polishing notes for you but you don't have to amend or resubmit this one (but you can if you want!)

    -The start pose feels like he is looking upwards at nothing and he's a little symetrical.

    -When he comes back from looking over the edge, the path of action looks like it arcs upwards in the hips, but you can arc the other way to make it feel more natural.

    -And the landing is just a fraction slow.  From the stretch to the squash.  (I think you can remove 1 or 2 frames from there)

    But great animation, keep it up.

  • Forrest Harless (forrest-harless)

    Nice work! Very sharp!!